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Ponder and reply...

Ponder and reply...

Has the genre of poetry lost its charm? I searched for 3 days to find the poem I used in 'Kavita', a wallpaper but got no feedback...
I was hoping for a surge of feedback...
Is poetry dead????
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Reply #276 Top
Good one, motion... here's another...

"Just yesterday morning they let me know you were gone
Susan the plans they made put an end to you
I walked out this morning and I wrote down this song
I just can't remember who to send it to.

I've seen fire and I've seen rain
I've seen sunny days that I thought would never end
I've seen lonely times when I could not find a friend
But I alway thought that I'd see you again.

Won't you look down upon me Jesus you've got to help me make a stand
You've just got to help me through another day
My body's aching and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way.

Now I'm walking my mind to an easy time
my back turned towards the sun
Lord knows when the cold wind blows
It'll turn your head around
There's hours of time on the telephone line
to talk about things to come
Sweet dreams and flying machines in pieces on the ground."

James Taylor - "Fire and Rain" - 'Sweet Baby James' - December 1969


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Reply #277 Top
Here's poetry for the tummy...

On the Menu:

I'm making "Cioppino" (an Italian fish stew that starts with sauteed fresh minced garlic, onions, leeks in olive oil and butter...then some white wine to simmer and add crushed Italian tomatoes with some bay leaf and a sprinkle of oregano and parsley and salmon, mussels, clams, bay scallops, prawns etc.) and homemade sourdough Bruschetta (oven toasted slices of bread with butter, olive oil and fresh garlic and parmesan).

I'm making enough to feed an army and everyone is invited!

Man, I'm so as of late tired but I do love to cook!

/me is off to pull the pin bones out of the salmon before dicing it up!

(((HUGS)))

-witto ol' me




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Reply #278 Top
Yes, Fire and Rain is too sad. And the circumstances behind the writing of the lyric is too, too sad.
Reply #279 Top
Yes, it's a sad song alright.... part of what makes it so moving....

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Reply #280 Top
/me says "Hi, AngEla... hope you're saving a plate for me......"

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Reply #281 Top
/me's fingers smell like fish now

I'll dish you up a big bowl Jam as long as you're not allergic to shellfish!

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Reply #282 Top
Oops Guess I have to try

/me 's fingers?

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Reply #283 Top
/me smell's like a low-stinking tide now. Time to wash up! My poor, poor keyboard will never forgive me!

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Reply #284 Top
Love shellfish, AngEla! Love all kinds of seafood...
I especially love good home cooking... yummy!
/me 's tummy is a'rumblin'....

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Reply #285 Top
/me thinks Jammy's tummy needs some home cookin' and pronto!

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Reply #287 Top
But instead, I'm gonna run out and pick up the turkey club sammich I just ordered......

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Reply #288 Top
Hours
every
hour
of the day
I think
of you

I have done wrong,
why?
I don't
know
I have done wrong

and yearning
for a day
with you
every hour
of the day



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Reply #289 Top
One of the saddest and most anti-war songs around....particularly for Aussies....read it and weep, Mister Bush...

And the Band Played Waltzing Matilda - by Eric Bogle

Now when I was a young man I carried my pack
And lived the free life of the rover
From the Murray's Green Basin to the dusty outback
I waltzed my Matilda all over
Then in 1915 my country said "Son,
It's time you stopped rambling, there's work to be done."
So they gave me a tin hat and they gave me a gun
And they marched me away to the war

And the band played Waltzing Matilda
As the ship pulled away from the quay
And amidst all the cheers, flag waving and tears
We sailed off for Gallipoli

And how well I remember that terrible day
How our blood stained the sand and the water
And of how in that hell that they called Souvla Bay
We were butchered like lambs at the slaughter
'Johnny Turk' he was ready, he'd primed himself well
He rained us with bullets and he showered us with shell
And in five minutes flat he'd blown us all to hell
Nearly blew us right back to Australia

And the band played Waltzing Matilda
While we stopped to bury our slain
We buried ours and the Turks buried theirs
Then it started all over again

And those that were left, well we tried to survive
In that mad world of death, blood and fire
And for ten weary weeks I kept myself alive
Though around me the corpses piled higher
Then a big Turkish shell knocked me arse-over-head
And when I awoke in my hospital bed
And saw what it had done, well, I wished I was dead
Never knew there was worse things than dying

For I'll go no more waltzing Matilda
All around the green bush far and free
For to hump tent and pegs a man needs both legs
No more waltzing Matilda for me

So, they collected the wounded, the crippled, the maimed
And shipped us back home to Australia
The legless, the armless, the blind, the insane
The proud, wounded heroes of Souvla
And when our ship pulled into Circular Quay
I looked at the place where my legs used to be
And thanked Christ there was no one there waiting for me
To grieve and to mourn and to pity

But the band played Waltzing Matilda
As they carried us down the gangway
But nobody cheered, they just stood there and stared
Then they turned all their faces away

So now every April I sit on my porch
And I watch the parade pass before me
I see my old comrades, how proudly they march
Reliving old dreams and past glories
And the old men march slowly, old bones stiff and sore
They're tired old heroes of a forgotten war
And the young people ask "What are they marching for?"
And I ask myself the same question

But the band plays Waltzing Matilda
And the old men still answer the call
But as year follows year, more old men disappear
Some day no one will march there at all

Waltzing Matilda, Waltzing Matilda
Who'll go a'waltzing Matilda with me?
And their ghosts may be heard as they march by that billabong
Who'll come a'waltzing Matilda with me?
Reply #290 Top
By Christine Lavant

I HEAR THE HEAVY MOON approaching,
I hear shallow sleep walking,
my memory sharpens all knives
on the memory stone.


Five crows picked the poppyhead empty,
its crown takes a viper
and resting in the heart's hollow
the seeds carry sleep.


The little knives sing merrily and steeled:
We will slaughter the fat moon,
we will skin the insolent snake
and clean the sorrowful bowl.


I hear the heavy moon falling,
I hear the thin creature hiss,
five brave birds transplant
the heart in memory.



Translated from the German by David Chorlton




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Reply #291 Top
My verse:

Gulls fly, winds blow
Don't ask why if you don't know
Wish for luck, wish for rain
Wish for reasons, watch me go

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Reply #292 Top
Okay ashu, we gotta start bribing people to write a verse for us.......

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Reply #293 Top
Walter Becker - "Surf and/or Die" - '11 tracks of Whack' - 1994

FYI (Walter Becker is the guitar player and Donald Fagen's songwriting partner in 'Steely Dan')

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Reply #297 Top
What kinda bribe JM?
Good morning to you all (or is it good evening)
Reply #298 Top
What bout werewolf?
Dear sir, won't u write a verse to contribute to our poem? LEASE:
Reply #300 Top
I liked motion's poem. Inspiring.
And you Sir WOM, I hope you read my tribute to you at the Scales wallpaper page. If you haven't, please do.