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Ponder and reply...

Ponder and reply...

Has the genre of poetry lost its charm? I searched for 3 days to find the poem I used in 'Kavita', a wallpaper but got no feedback...
I was hoping for a surge of feedback...
Is poetry dead????
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Reply #226 Top
Poem-thon NOT thong (LMAO)!

Oh no! I see the new video coming out now!

"Poets gone wild! Watch as they strip down to their bare adjectives!"

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Reply #228 Top
Wow! me writing again! That would be something

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Reply #229 Top
/me thinks you need to be tickled until you beg for chocolates.....

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Reply #230 Top
/me is having consonantipation and needs to have vowel movement.

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Reply #232 Top
And sometimes YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Oh yeah babe!

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Reply #233 Top

Bad poem (he-he)


Sometimes my poopy smells so bad
He doesn't mean to make you sad,
But when he's out he's very glad
...

are you ACTUALLY reading that?

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Reply #234 Top
Clean up on Isle 234!

Better get serious... *innocent look*

Titled, "_____" (fill in the blank )


I imagine a touch and a sweet soft breath
Each dream is like a little death,
Stars that shine on my true love’s head
Somewhere in his world the same page is read.

I grasp a glimpse of what could never be
Then reality’s wave crashes back to me,
It takes me back to my unhappy place
Living without feeling his beautiful face.

Can you hear me?

Our paths have crossed in friendly days
Lonely nights, far away you must stay,
Kismet and destiny have their hand
God only knows what has been planned.

Death and life, happiness and strife
These lessons that strengthen the soul,
Hope and love, manna for the mind and heart
These things make a person more whole.

If I didn’t believe there was a master at work
Who has given me all that I know,
I doubt that I could have endured all the pain
And I know that it helped me to grow.

If you need a friend to love you forever
Then that you have in me,
Though my words aren’t always deft or clever
I will try to be all I can be.
Do you see?

I wish with less words and much more emotion
I could hold you and show you my love and devotion.
But dreaming and wishing is not what I’m all about
I want give you a love that you needn’t ever doubt.


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Reply #235 Top

"As time goes on
I realize, just what you mean
to me.
And now, now that you're near
promise your love, that I've waited
to share.
And dreams, of our moments together...
Colour My World....with hopes
of loving you"

'Chicago'



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Reply #236 Top
As i hover and float above myself,
i look at me and ponder my wealth.
Higher and higher i float in the air,
to only wonder what might be there.
Above the trees and mountains i go,
out of this world i find a new home...

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Reply #237 Top
I have no such problems you all, It is 1 in the afternoon here in Mumbai (call it Bombay if u must).So no sleeping problems at this hour.

We need some more contribution. Why don't u pen ur thoughts Sir elvee (we are in a dream phase of the poem right now, so you just might help us ).

And as for your 'poopy' Angela, flush the toilet after you are done. If u think it stinks, imagine our plight, hehe.

Somebody call for a-seraphim, nothing from him and Jafo too :HELLO!! ANYBODY OUT THERE?:
Reply #238 Top
/me giggles to Ahshu, I was "a-seraphim"

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Reply #239 Top
/me is finally reincarnated back into her own namesake.

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Reply #240 Top
Hey, and you said you couldn't write!
that was excellent elvee...

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Reply #241 Top
As i hover and float above myself,
i look at me and ponder my wealth.
Higher and higher i float in the air,
to only wonder what might be there.
Above the trees and mountains i go,
out of this world i find a new home...

/me thinks Sir elvee is lonely just a bit. Only a bit. After all, aren't we all?

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Reply #242 Top
Great poem Angela :APPLAUSE:
I wish I could write like that!!!!

I like the way you think Sir elvee (may I call u elvee? Sir elvee is too formal.)

An eternal optimist, eh?
Reply #243 Top
okay, your turn again ashu..

time for a verse.....

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Reply #244 Top
Ut oh. Should have said, I was quoting Sir Elvee in that last message.

/me thinks: Is it getting convoluted in here or is it just me?

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Reply #245 Top
Thanks for letting me know Angela,
So you are valid for two more inputs, hehe.
Reply #246 Top
elvee is fine ashu Sir is just a title

More of a dreamer AngEla i think, but very perceptive you are.

Thanks JM

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Reply #247 Top
And I dream a Dream,
The Dream that I dream,
Is it a dream That I dream,
Or does the Dream dream me?

:HOWZZAT?:
Reply #248 Top
I dreamed a dream
that was dreaming me
we passed each other
on the dreaming sea...

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Reply #249 Top
/me gives Sir elvee a BIG SQUISHY albeit lady-like and appropriate hug () and waves to JM and ASHU and Johnboy and Mary Beth () and snuggles under her quilt to fall fast a sleep!

Just kidding about the poo-poo poem, Ashu...I'm just silly that way. And I was A-Seraphim...not a he...but a SHE.

Nighty night my poetic friends!

/me yawns and stretches and tiptoes to her bed with a smile for her friends on her face...

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Reply #250 Top
Good night, sweet Lady...
dream happy dreams and sleep tight...



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