The night

The night -
If it is a window
to a soul
I am not quite sure
I can see through the blurred lines;
and if this port contains
my history, your future
some random being's path
then I stumble with the
code I need to understand
it with.
I am ignorant of the truth
of it all.
All I can see is a darkness
that quenches all the light
except that of the stars
and the smile on your face.
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Reply #1 Top
enigmatic and compelling - a little obscure, but I think that's a plus.
Reply #2 Top
thanks and best regards Buddah.
Reply #3 Top
Oooh, *shivers*. Very nice, Al.

~Zoo
Reply #4 Top
Thanks much Shaun
Reply #5 Top
You are so much cooler than I am. I love "All I can see is a darkness that quenches all the light except that of the stars and the smile on your face." It makes me think that even though you may have no idea what you are supposed to be doing right now, you've got someones love that you can hold on to and that will be your light through your confusion. This one hit close to home for me. Kinda freaky actually, how close it is to how I feel now.
Reply #6 Top
Alex! This is beautiful! Don't know what else to say.

Stars are always wonderful. Whether they're black or burning.