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Critics Wanted

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I had an SS approved, but the WP I made and used in it was not. I thought it was my best work to date, but obviously I overlooked something. So, have at it. I want to know where I messed up or what I missed. Be honest and as brutal as you want, because I have other stuff I am working on and don't want to make the same mistakes.


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Reply #26 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Seemed that the need for critics had increased...
Reply #27 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Me? Off topic?
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Reply #28 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Somebody stop me.


Why? You were going great guns

The was a young fairy called Nuff
Whose flights were often rough
When jet propelled
Some say she smelled
Others said that's fair enough
Reply #29 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Hairy Fairies can be scary
when covered all in dingleberries
So you best not tarry
when you smell a Hairy Fairy
Reply #30 from WinCustomize Forums Top
There was a young fairy from Ealing
Who had a most peculiar feeling
Without as much as a care
She flew through the air
And left hair all over the ceiling
Reply #31 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Hairy Fairies can't use Nare.
On the can, a warning's there,
that Hairy Fairies should beware
and never..NEVER..consider Nare.
For Hairy Fairies using Nare
will often find themselves impared.
For Nare on Fairies will GROW hair
and with a Schick they'd better fare.
So if you see a Hairy Fairy
or a Fairy nary hairy,
please remind them to be wary
for Nare will only make them hairy.
A Quatro or Norelco where
they have the need to shed some hair
will better serve them if they care
that others snicker at their hair.

It's not my fault. I ran out of meds.



Jester 2
Reply #32 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Ran out of meds, eh?

But whatever that other stuff you're on is, I'll have what you're having
Reply #33 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Needs to share the Java nuts, quit chewing them and grind a few for some coffee....
Reply #34 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Hairy Fairies LIKE caffeine
but it can make them rather mean.
For they were meant to be serene
and not hopped up on Java beans.
Some use Bailey's Irish Cream
to liven up their caffeine.
And then in thongs they dance for glee
among the Wicklow forest trees.
So if you see,two or three,
Hairy Fairies on caffiene,
and they offer some with Irish Cream,
they'll throw in a thong for you, for FREE.

In the start of this I asked that somebody stop me. But NOOOooooOOO...you had to encourage me.
Reply #35 from WinCustomize Forums Top
In the snow?
Reply #36 from WinCustomize Forums Top
the fairies aren't wearing thongs, and I hope you aren't either, Po!
Reply #37 from WinCustomize Forums Top
the fairies aren't wearing thongs, and I hope you aren't either, Po!



OuchOMGShocked 5

A simple "That'll do pig' would have sufficed.
Reply #39 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Why would anyone want to stop you....seems like you're having such a good time
Reply #40 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Go Po. Go Po. Go Po. Go Po!!!

It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and
Reply #41 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Reply #42 from WinCustomize Forums Top


T M I


T M I

Reply #43 from WinCustomize Forums Top
[Heck....something's wrong, I can't quote]



"It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and"........your binoculars go up in smoke.


If you hide in the bushes and be werry werry quiet, they will come a little closer so you don't need 'em anymore, just yer camera.
Reply #44 from WinCustomize Forums Top
I can't quote either?!?!?!?

Hairy Faries should take heed
be wary when the dragon breathes
engulfed in flames your thong will be
and butt crack burn is hard to treat
Asbestos thongs are not cheap
and they really don't protect the cheeks
but if from flames you need relief
just hang your azz in Wicklow creek

I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet.
Reply #45 from WinCustomize Forums Top
I can't quote either?!?!?!?

Hairy Faries should take heed
be wary when the dragon breathes
engulfed in flames your thong will be
and butt crack burn is hard to treat
Asbestos thongs are not cheap
and they really don't protect the cheeks
but if from flames you need relief
just hang your azz in Wicklow creek

I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet.


I can quote
Reply #46 from WinCustomize Forums Top
I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet


There is still time.

There once was a man from Nantucket
Reply #47 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Po's on a roll

Is Po' short for poetic?
Reply #48 from WinCustomize Forums Top
There once was a man from Nantucket
who kept fairy hair in a bucket
When asked why, he said 'I freeze it with wine.
And sell them as Fairy Hair Sucketts"

I think I just jumped the shark.
Reply #49 from WinCustomize Forums Top
I think a fairy hair sweater might be more festive at this time of year...
Reply #50 from WinCustomize Forums Top
Fairy Hair sweaters can itch
and that's not the only glitch
Their pheromones arouse all dragons around
and one on your leg is a b----.