For other reasons

(Note: not the same Samantha that has an account on JU in the AC Guild)

You're so different from the last,
You come to me; I went to her,
She wanted sex, and I wanted
To give it to her
But I love you Samantha,
for other reasons.

You're so cute, there's nothing else to call it
Innocent like a child, sensible as a woman
I haven't had this much fun
for years, since I was young
I had fun before,
but for other reasons.

Everyone asks "You tapped that shit yet?"
"When ya gonna fuck her?"
"Seriously? When's it gonna happen?"
I hate that, I don't want to fuck you
You're too innocent, I don't want to taint you
Alas, they're still my friends
but for other reasons

Oh Samantha, I say to you
Oh Andrew, you say to me
I love you too, I love you most
No you don't, but yes I do
Let's call it a draw, fair enough
We love each other, and not
for other reasons.


Now I didn't write this for praise and glory, I'd like to be a better writer, so don't be afraid to tell me what you didn't like. Just remember, there's a line between constructive criticism and insulting my abilities, just think of the children.
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Reply #1 Top
Nice I am glad you said it wasn't Sam for JU, but I believe I knew who you were talkin about. But some people don't. Nice am glad you, fun and I hope you two have the best.

Stacey
Reply #2 Top
Hey, not bad. It came from the heart...so that makes it good. Maybe some different words here and there, but I'm not going to break it down. I think it's pretty good....you just poured your heart out...and it makes me want to go Awwwwwww....and that I shall, "Awwwwwwwwww". Really, a poem doesn't have to be all technical...write what you feel, and it'll be good.

~Zoo
Reply #3 Top
but I believe I knew who you were talkin about.


Duh, it's his girlfriend...the good one.

~Zoo
Reply #4 Top
Its good that you'll feel this way about her andy!
Reply #5 Top
Oh Samantha, I say to youOh Andrew, you say to me


Right there is the AWWW moment...it just makes you smile

~Zoo
Reply #6 Top
But if I said "Oh Shaun", it'd wipe that smile off your face faster than dust in a rainstorm.
Reply #7 Top
I know it does... I've had to resort to the homosexual references a time or two to get him to stop talking before.

Capt. over and out!
Reply #8 Top
I like it too, but i would have used different words for the third verse. But then again, that's probably what makes it the most honest part of it.
Reply #9 Top
I figured it wasn't me...

Sam(the other one)
Reply #10 Top
Awwww....that's so sweet Andy! I think you're finally growing up! Yay! lol

~carebear~
Reply #11 Top
But if I said "Oh Shaun", it'd wipe that smile off your face faster than dust in a rainstorm.


True enough....

I know it does... I've had to resort to the homosexual references a time or two to get him to stop talking before.


I loathe you.....

~Zoo
Reply #12 Top
Sorry 'bout that, island_gurl, unfortunately that's about all I hear at school. Not necessarily directed toward me, but it still means the same. It's pretty pathetic, I can't wait to leave this place.