Whoever is responsible for editing/approving the text needs to be double-checked.
I saw "SHAPE MARS' FATE" but should be "SHAPE MARS'S FATE"
I saw "We know you are anxious to get the give-away..." but should be "We know you are eager to get the give-away..."
I saw "...jet fuel is quite flammable." but should be "...jet fuel is quite inflammable."
Just to name a few.
