Make this Choice

from JoeUser Forums
If I’m adding to the pain,
Please don’t hesitate,
To tell me what I’m doing wrong,
To push me away or hold me to you,
whatever you feel is best.

I’m a fool sometimes,
And I add to this maze of stupid rhymes,
A plea and a set of crying eyes,
A list of hopes and wings that fly,
take or leave, it’s your choice.

Tell me that you want me,
Or tell me that you hate me,
Either way,
Please do something, say,
What you will, what you please.

Once I had a notion,
And it’s set my gears in motion,
I can see the absolute,
so far away, but resolute,
Pick between my different personalities.

Make this choice, I plead,
I beg with you, just make the choice please,
I can live with a fate,
But not with indecision and second guessing,

But lo!
Unhappy man,
I forgot to mention,
That indecision springs from me.

Not sure where this came from. Guess that's the beauty of poetry.

Peace,

Beebes
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
so lost this made me feel
maybe that's his ideal
for all to read the poet's thought
and come back with what we ought
now i say that i'm confused
but whose to say this feeling is unused?

lol

Good one al, even though i was as lost in reading this one as i was in writing mine.

Capt. over and out!
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Deep are you in your words,
So colorful and bright,
Just like a flock of birds.
I feel pain for your plight,
And I wish you well,
So hard is your inner fight.
Good luck, and farewell....

(Whew...it's hard to scrape these off the top of your head eh?...heh)

~Zoo
Multiplicity - Control multiple PCs using one keyboard and mouse
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
You guys crack me up. Thanks for the replies!

Peace,

Beebes
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
for a friend so true
it's easy to do
just say your need
i'll bring it indeed

Capt. over and out!
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
You guys are weird. lol. Nice poem Alex.

~carebear~
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Weird are we,
Who think you be?
Our verse is fun,
So lay off the presumptions, hun.

~Zoo
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
What zoo says is right on
now i ask that you be gone
when you can keep with the rhyme
we just may give thee the time
not to tell the hour though
but to talk as we all know
until a later day
that's all i have to say
there's no reason to pout
it's just the captain saying capt. over and out!