Request for input

Is this stuff OK?

I've been at this for almost a week now. How'm I doin?

Are the articles too long?

Are the topics interesting, or at least entertaining ?

What can I do to improve, change, or otherwise increase readability?

Any comments, good, bad, or indifferent, would be most appreciated( I think ) .
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U doing great.. :)
Nicely describing american daily routine (like i imagine it) in a fluent and humurous way
An enjoyably written article never can be too long..
To increase readability...add a pic of u naked with only ur craftsmAn tools ;)...LOL..(im kidding!)