a poem for my daughter

at 7 1/2 months old

Hello little cutie pie
you just woke up, and so did I
I gaze at you as you lie there
with big, dark eyes and tousled hair.

Hello little eager one
up every morning with the sun
you smile and squeal as I come in
can't wait to have the day begin.

Hello little lovely girl
you coo and chatter to the world
then flail your arms and gladly shout
when I reach down to lift you out.

Hello little girl, my sweet
It's breakfast time, can't wait to eat
You love to grab your toys and play
I love you more with each new day.
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Reply #1 Top
I love the picture you create with your words!

Aren't kids fantastic?
Reply #2 Top
Why thank you.

I could ramble on for pages about how amazingly cute my little girl is and how she's going to be the most wonderful thing ever to grace this planet, and possibly several others.
The poem is actually a pretty accurate representation of this morning, by the way.
Reply #4 Top

I could ramble on for pages about how amazingly cute my little girl is


I could too, she's absolutely adorable! 


This was cute, Citahellion....

Reply #5 Top

this is beautiful, citahellion. you're a lucky fellow indeed to have such a wonderful little daughter

vanessa/mig XX
Reply #6 Top
That's awesome! Thanks for sharing this one with me! I think that she will probably inspire you to more works in the future. Keep them coming!
Reply #7 Top
That was great. Having a couple little girls myself I really could feel the love and joy. What fun!