Lost in the monotony of cheeseburgers

from JoeUser Forums
I see them playing outside my window
mammoth creatures designed
self-created to destroy
plastered between gridlines
lost in the monotony of cheeseburgers.

Let them scream their "hoohah"s
Fueled by meat and
testosterone
I will enjoy myself by this quiet tree
and listen to the noise
of nature
overcoming
the screams and laughter
of its greatest threat.
poetry
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like this one.
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Mmm...I like cheeseburgers.

Great poem, Al.

~Zoo
Ashes of the Singularity II
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Gosh Shuan, there for a second I thought you didn't get it
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
Gosh Shaun, there for a second I thought you didn't get it


Heh, I like to mess with people...you should know that by now.

~Zoo
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
I love you bunches and miss you so much it makes me dizzy! But i'm doing okay, muchos better than I thought i would. Breaking off ties with people doesn't make it any easier, but I just don't want to do ju anymore. More later... I hope your life in this new beginning is spectacular!!!!!
Love,
Little Brat
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
You're pretty good there with your visuals! Loving that title too!
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
You're pretty good there with your visuals! Loving that title too!


Thanks!
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
I love you bunches and miss you so much it makes me dizzy! But i'm doing okay, muchos better than I thought i would. Breaking off ties with people doesn't make it any easier, but I just don't want to do ju anymore. More later... I hope your life in this new beginning is spectacular!!!!!

Love,
Little Brat


I'll see you soon Little Brat! I can understand if you don't want to do JU... I guess I was just making assumptions again.