Prisoner of my own mind

Dark thoughts

April 21, 2005 7:09 PM from

Bars…. Invisible. Erected by me.

Prisoner and warden. I be

Trapped.. rotting body..

Heart forever young

Free me…pleading.

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Reply #1 April 21, 2005 7:54 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Excellent poem, prose, whatever you consider it to be. I think it is wonderful and describes the human mind well.

~Shadow

Reply #2 April 21, 2005 7:57 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Reply By: only a shadowPosted: Thursday, April 21, 2005Excellent poem, prose, whatever you consider it to be. I think it is wonderful and describes the human mind well.

thank you, I seldom get any comments on my ummmm poems I appreciate your comment.

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