Feedback After a Few Games

 

Founders Elite Pack - That sounds important.  My, my, not just a founder, but an elite one at that.  I'm sure EVERYONE wants to know what I think.  Well, regardless, I was promised certain privileges, such as the right to spew my opinions in this highly exclusive forum.

 

First off, the Stardock 50% off sale is a great idea - especially having that sale apply to early access titles like this one.  I'm a little bit behind on my 3MA listening, and when I heard their recent review of Offworld Trading Company ("Soren Johnson's Mars-based econ RTS?  Is that out already?  I've been waiting for that since the first time the podcast intern mentioned it!"), I headed straight to the website to get any info I could about it.  Seeing $80 for immediate access deflated my sails a bit, but then finding the 50% off sale, coupled with realizing that I could make a friend happy by giving him the extra gift key...  well, it was a no-brainer at that point.

As it is, I feel like I've already gotten at least half my money's worth from an "incomplete game".  It's very nicely put together.  This is exactly the sort of game I want - like everything Arcen Games puts out, and much of what Stardock does - it's somewhat genre-defying.  It's not LIKE any other game.  Even if a game isn't fantastic, it gets points if it's not just another "3rd person shooter" (Seriously, am I the only one that's annoyed by moving the camera back 3 feet and calling it a different genre from an FPS?  Really?) or any other clone of a popular style.  This is unique.  And also interesting.  Even the supposedly "place-holder" graphics are not bad, though I can't quite figure out what's up with the pyramids.  Are those supposed to be something, or are they just weird representations of mountains?

First, tutorial.  Doesn't work for me.  I mean, it works, I think.  There's a spew of error messages that pop up, but they are partially behind the tutorial message and don't stay on screen long enough to copy them down.  If this isn't a known issue, I will try it again and get a screen cap of the error messages.  But even once it starts, I feel like I'm pressed for time immediately.  The visible map is expanding fairly quickly and a voice keeps shouting at me.  "High levels of Carbon found.  Low levels of Iron found."  Getting smacked in the face with this, the first time you load the game, and feeling like you need to take in all of that information as well as the scrolling text, and also get a semblance for what you're looking at on the map - it's overwhelming to say the least.  If you're not done designing the tutorial yet, then disregard, but I would suggest that you start the tutorial with the map fully revealed, and with the map legend explained somehow (either with a box that explains it, have the disembodied voice go over it, or, perhaps ideally, have little callouts that have a line drawn from, say,  a low carbon deposit to a small box that explains what it is.  And start paused, if possible.

So yeah, I just skipped the tutorial because I felt frazzled.  I set up a Snail-pace, Beginner-AI game.  I chose the Robotic Colony mostly because its small footprint fit in the space where I wanted to build my colony.  As it turns out, Robotic seems like a good beginner choice, as it has the most obvious advantages.  Being able to ignore several resources is pretty helpful for a first game.  Of course, I didn't actually realize that at the time and I built some water and food accumulators so that I could sell the food (it was at a pretty good price all game, so it didn't work out terribly).  But suggesting that players start with Robotic if they don't know what else to do might be a good idea...

Let me pause here to lodge one of my stupider complaints about the game.  The thing is - I hate that it's real-time.  Soren, could you please start over and make this turn-based?  No?  Okay, then...  Seriously, I do kind of wish it wasn't realtime.  After my initial play at Snail pace, I have been playing on Slow, because I really don't like twitchy games.  I need a chance to mouse over things, see what everything does, mull over my decisions.  After a couple plays, I see that you don't really have to click quickly, MOST of the time.  And there really is more than enough time to think in a Slow game, and with more experience probably on faster speeds as well.  But for a first game on Normal, it feels like the mouseover delay takes FOREVER, and you're being outproduced like crazy while you try to read what stuff does.

More reasonable complaint - the options screen doesn't save your last-used parameters.  I'm guessing that will be fixed by release.

Company stocks - I think these are pretty well-done, assuming that your goal is to make a simple system without too much cognitive weight that is primarily used for determining the winner.  If I had my way, I would probably make this bit more complex, but I think it comes down to how much rules weight you actually WANT in the stock market part of the game.  My biggest beef, if we wanted to go more for realism as opposed to a simple way to measure victory, is this: why do companies issue stock?  It's generally to gain capital for expansion and operating expenses.  I sell, say, 40% of my company, for a bunch of money that I use to expand and operate the company.  In return, my investors have some say in my operations and expect some financial return.  As such, I'm wondering why there is debt in this game as a separate entity from shares.  If I need money to operate, I should just issue more shares (diluting and devaluing the shares that are already out there).  That sounds simple, but then you have a bunch of other questions to look at - can a company avoid losing the game by never issuing shares (the way I see it, answer is NO, unless they want to starve or suffocate and still lose the game - but what if they produce plenty of water and food and power?  there needs to be a mechanism to avoid a stalemate, as there is in the current game); are dividends paid out, and when; if the company gets the capital from selling shares, then what happens when it buys its own stock?  There are several ways to answer these questions.  For dividends and capitalization questions, one way to handle it is to use Company Money and Personal Money as separate entities.  You might reference board games such as the 18xx series, or the recent game Panamax, for inspiration.  Or you might have a company unable to buy its own stock, or have the money go "away" if it buys its own stock.  You might have the company pay dividends to other companies but never to itself (its own dividends are simply a percentage of what it would normally have to pay that are protected earnings).  So, err... yeah.  You COULD add a lot of complexity to the stock system, and I think overall it would be good.  But then again, the simple system is pretty good, too, and doesn't involve a ton of extra dev work.

Commodities market - Again, pretty good in a simple, easily understandable way.  Another poster mentioned placing buy-orders and sell-orders, and that would be great.  I would love to say "sell chemicals at 100, buy chemicals at 10" and not have to watch the market to the exclusion of all other tasks during a Surplus or Shortage.  You could also have some fun stuff like Selling Short, or Options trading.  Those things would be great, but maybe they could wait for an expansion.  You're planning expansions, right?

Engineering Lab - everything requires Chemicals.  That seems weird to me.  I forgot if that's the same deal with Patents.  I would think that improving Steel production might include Iron, improving Fuel Production might include O2, improving Carbon production might require Carbon or Food or something...   Basically, Chemicals being required makes sense, but I would think it would be SOME chemicals and some of another appropriate resource, rather than just a lot of chemicals.

Black Market - I just really hate the Black Market.  I think it's probably fine for experienced players playing against each other, but starting off, it just feels so frustrating and unavoidable.  See... in a normal RTS, if you get attacked by an opponent, they have to send troops through your front lines to where they are going to do damage to you.  To stop them, you have your troops (either the ones that are already in the way, or troops diverted from other areas), your towers, and also your base layout where the building whose loss will cripple you is positioned so that it is hard for the enemy to get to.  Basically, the enemy has to pit its strength against your strength to do direct damage to your ability to compete.  But in OTC, the best you can do is hire a Goon Squad, and you certainly can't Goon Squad everything.  In general, the enemy spends a bunch of money to hurt you directly, and chooses any spot they want for the damage to occur in.  To the player being hit, it is a loss of control.  All of your Farms are frozen, and there's nothing you could have done about it and nothing you CAN do about it except buy food.  I played a few games without the Black Market, and other than the inability to buy claims and a couple of the colonies losing one of their abilities, I didn't miss it.  I guess that something LIKE the Black Market needs to be in the game, but I wish it was more true interaction than just feeling like a TAKE THAT card game.  Then again, adding military units to the game is probably a complexity that isn't needed or warranted.

 

That's all I've got for now.  (That's ALL???)

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Oh wait, I remembered some more things:

 

It would be nice to right-click on terrain to pull up a radial menu of everything you can build there.  Actually, right clicking on opponents' buildings to pull up a radial menu of purchased sabotage wouldn't hurt either.

I know currently right-click scrolls the map, but so does middle click, and honestly, click-drag to scroll the map is cumbersome.  I'd much prefer edge-scrolling.  So if right-click no longer scrolled, but edge-scrolling worked and middle-click could still drag the map, that would be better.  (edit: This assumes that edge-scrolling really doesn't work - it didn't work for me, but maybe I need to go full-screen for it to work?)

Also, regarding the Black Market - what if each sabotage had a few seconds warning before it went off?  Then, maybe you could click it and pay the same price to cancel the sabotage?  Or you could buy a Goon Squad as a reaction (but in this case, it'd be kind of lame if the Goon Squad got to steal the sabotage...  maybe that should only work if the Goon Squad is already placed).  Although that would cause Goon Squads to escalate in price a little too fast.  Maybe a second defensive option that could be used as a reaction, and leave Goon Squad as a proactive defense.  I think that would address my biggest problems with the Black Market.

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I enjoyed reading that.

In reply to "Why is there debt in the game?", you have an interesting point. If your stock-value just went down and you can buy your own stock back to pay off debt, I don't know why debt is in the game. That's not what I was going to say when I started typing, but now that I think of it, I think you have a good point.

 

In reference to sabatoge taking too much control away from the target: the black-market is so expensive. No one would use it if it wasn't pretty much a sure thing. It's also worth considering that sabatoge is currently the most direct way to touch another player. Most of the game is about competing in the same market, but sabatoge gives players the chance to single out a particular target and assure one's own existence to them. They don't always recognize that the shortage of water was your deliberate plan, but they know someone bought an underground-nuke just to deplete their aluminum-mine. It lets the target know that they must be doing something well.

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Quoting Clydebink, reply 2
I enjoyed reading that.
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Thanks!  

In reply to "Why is there debt in the game?", you have an interesting point. If your stock-value just went down and you can buy your own stock back to pay off debt, I don't know why debt is in the game. That's not what I was going to say when I started typing, but now that I think of it, I think you have a good point.
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Yeah...  I mean, there are good reasons that real world companies have both shareholders and bank loans, but since both things pretty much serve the same purpose, it seems a little odd to have both in a game where the stock system is so stripped down and uncomplicated.  After posting that, I have come up with some more concrete ideas about how I would redesign the stock system to get rid of debt and have companies issue shares instead (possibly adding loans back in as a high-interest alternative).  But it's been my experience that designers don't like to be designed at.  They basically want feedback on what's wrong and not advice on how to fix it (I do understand why, mostly).  Posting exact details on how I would go about it would probably just be a waste of time and possibly counterproductive.  As a software developer and 30-year amateur/hobbyist game designer, it's hard for me to avoid giving feature suggestions completely, but I try to keep it general and abstract...


 

In reference to sabatoge taking too much control away from the target: the black-market is so expensive. No one would use it if it wasn't pretty much a sure thing.
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True, but that doesn't mean that black market costs couldn't be reduced, or have costs partially refunded if defended against.  I'm just not a big fan of the one-sided pseudo-interaction of the "take that!" style.  I think that sabotage could become more of a real interaction in the game, if the designers wanted it to be.

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The devs have been receptive to design ideas. If you have some ideas on how to improve different systems, stock/black market, you should post them. The stock/debt has changed numerous times since the prototype became available. The black market hasn't changed as drastically, but is still in flux and does need more work.