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Let me tell you a story..........

Let me tell you a story..........

Again......

Some of you may already know my friend, Yum.
You can check him out here: https://www.wincustomize.com/viewskin.aspx?LibID=8&SkinID=2733
Then, if you enjoy the story, you can visit "Serenia" here:
https://www.wincustomize.com/skins.asp?library=8&SkinID=255

Here goes.......



As some of you may know, I have a very unusual friend. (I don't really like to call him a pet, as he is probably more intelligent than I am, and I wouldn't want to insult him.) He's a dragon. A small dragon I know, but what he lacks in stature he makes up for in features! His name is Yum, a name he acquired because of the sound he makes when he spies a chocolate covered orange, (his favorite food). I don't remember how he and I came together, it's all a bit of a blur now, but I like to think he appeared at a time when I needed guidance or assistance or just someone to talk to.
You see, Yum has this eerie knack of knowing just how you are feeling, and always manages to come up with a solution to your problems.
Anyway, the reason I am telling you this is, the other day Yum and I were walking on the moors near our home, and we stopped to bask a little in the sunshine and shoot the breeze for a while. We talked of lots of things, and Yum rolled around on his back in the heather like a playful labrador, opening and closing his beautiful, brightly colored wings, because "wings can get mighty itchy when they're folded up for hours on end", as he liked to inform me at least three times a day.
During a lull in our conversation, and while Yum was fricasee'ing an unfortunate dragonfly for a quick snack, I began to wonder exactly where he came from, this strange, highly intelligent and intuitive dragon. I had never thought to ask him before, because, as I mentioned, his arrival seemed a blur now, and it felt as though he had always been with me. So, as he was finishing his last piece of dragonfly wing, and carefully inspecting his silvery, razor sharp claws, I casually said, "Yum, where were you born?".

He looked at me in a serious way, although he actually looked quite comical, as his ears were flapping in the light breeze that had sprung up, and just as casually as I had asked, he replied, "I was born where oceans are born", and went back to curling his tongue around those powerful claws. Well, you can't say something like that to someone as inquisitive as me, and expect me to leave it there, so I asked,"Where the oceans are born?, and where might that be?". After a further moments thought, he said, "I was born in a land called Serenia, and please, don't confuse it with Verenia, where those horrible blue dragons come from, with their knobbly scales and plain blue wings, ugh!". He shuddered a little as he said that, and I had to stifle a laugh, as dragons are very proud creatures, and hate to be laughed at.
"Go on" I said, intrigued now by this talk of dragon lands and oceans being born, "tell me more".

"Well", he said, "Serenia is about three days south from here, as the dragon flies, and it's quite a barren place apart from the Spherical Stones, barren, yet very beautiful." He closed his eyes as if remembering something sorely missed, and went on, "All the earths oceans are born from the Spherical Stones, and they are what make Serenia such a beautiful place." "What are they?" I asked. He took a lazy swipe at another passing dragonfly, but missed by several inches and went on, "They are glass-like spheres of many colors and many sizes, and all draons are born inside them. The female dragons lay their eggs inside the biggest stones, and for the first few years of their lives, the young dragons drink the water that emanates from these magical stones, and that is how we get our brightly colored wings and magical powers".
I thought for a moment, and asked hopefully, "Could you take me there?". He smiled his sharp toothed smile at me and said,"I'm afraid not BoXXi", (he prefers to call me by my psuedonymn, as he thinks it sounds more Serenian.) "No human would survive the journey through the Falls of Bellna, and besides, if you did, you would only end up as a snack for one of the larger dragons that live there!". I must have looked very disappointed, because he took off, wings buzzing like a hummingbird, and came right up to my face and said, "I can still show it to you though, keep very still".

At that moment, there was a blinding flash and all I could see was a fantastical scene of sparkling water pouring from a huge round stone of many colors, and rainbow winged dragons emerging from holes in the top of the sphere to fly away into the strange colored horizon. Then with another flash it disappeared, and I was back on the moor with the setting sun casting swaying shadows from the blowing heather. Yum was already laid in the purple heather playfully pawing at a grasshopper, "Quick!" I said, "we have to get home", I picked him up and rather unceremoniously pushed him into my pocket. "But why?" he asked in a muffled voice from inside my jacket. "Because I have to draw the scene you just showed to me, I'm sure the folks on the net would love to see this glorious place where dragons and oceans are born", I said excitedly. I drew for several hours when we got back, recreating the scene that was burned into the back of my eyelids.
I even drew the dragons, but erased them after Yum told me I kept getting their colors wrong. Sheesh!....Dragons eh? who'd want one?


Yum is here:WWW Link


Serenia is here: WWW Link

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Reply #26 Top
Wonderful, BoXXi. And you should put something together, illustrations and all. I remember seeing Yum in your work, didn't know about this lovely story.

You don't have to be cut out for the "literary" world. If anyone else is interested, fine. If they've got $$$ even better.



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Reply #27 Top
I'm currently ripping it off and selling it to Little Golden Books....


This is what I thought about while reading, well Children's books that is

BoXXi, I think you could honestly make a very good series of books and could pretty much go the Piers Anthony direction or to Children's Books, maybe even both which would really be different. Then children could grow into young adults and carry along with Yum as long and as far as they liked.

I think your son has a very special father and will have the chance of being even more so as he learns of life and being human from you
Reply #28 Top
BoXXi, you should read Isaac Asimov's short stories about Azazel (sp?). I found yours very much in the same spirit and humour - well done!




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Reply #29 Top
he maybe will be as great as J.K. rowling

I would read a book by boxxi.

Reply #30 Top

awww....thanks guys, you really are kind. Maybe I will expand the story or write a new one since you gave such positive responses. Maybe it's time for some new "Yum" illustrations too. I have been busy with real life and work lately, so I haven't had time to do much of anything, but I will certainly be thinking about this.

Thanks again.....

Reply #31 Top
Having been a bit under the weather the last few days with flu etc. this story has really cheered me up. Bryan.....is there no end to your talents?
Now i have got my voice back i plan to read the story to my seven year old daughter Lucy at bedtime tonight........and you know what she is going to say......Can Uncle Bryan please tell us some more stories about Yum?
Reply #32 Top

Thanks Leo..... (are you still in England? e-mail me and let me know what is happening..... )

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Reply #33 Top
Yes still here........but off to Florida in 10 days.....Got the job at Disney and can't wait.........will mail you later tonight
Reply #34 Top
Leo can't wait for you to get here and settled in, then my wife and I can see about bring my daughter over for a weekend to Disney and maybe hooking up.

Hope your feeling better very soon if not already, being sick is never fun or comforting and traveling sick or right afterwards is even worse
Reply #35 Top
Thanks John.....appreciate that....yeah, feeling much more like my old self today......Would love to meet up with you and the family and i will give you a shout as soon as i have settled in
Reply #36 Top
10 days??!! WooHoo........
Reply #37 Top
Great story!!!!

Reply #38 Top
You got a dragon? I want one too....
Reply #39 Top
Right on BoXXi, this stuff is pure gold and well deserving of publication. Your reference to the moors and purple heather took me way back to my childhood in Devon and many a summers day on Dartmoor. I now live in Tasmania, Australia and sometimes yearn for those idyllic days amongst the gorse and heather, a real Devonshire tea with real clotted cream. Funny thing though, sometimes after a few scrumpies ( alcoholic cider for non-Englanders), I swore that I saw dragons on the moors myself , amongst other strange sights.
BTW, is there any fact in living near the moors, and if so, which ones, Dartmoor or the Yorkshire moors?
Reply #40 Top
Hi Starkers.... Thanks for the kind comment!  I live on the side of the Aire Valley, overlooking the river and those famous "Bronte Country" moors. Quite a view!     I have no plans to publish anything, if you look above, you will see I wrote this in 2002. It was just something I wrote for my daughter after I created Yum.  (and yes, there ARE dragons on the moors..... that is where I met Yum....)
Reply #41 Top
You're more than welcome, BoXXi, credit where credit is due. In the days of Olympus, you'd have been a god and the Greek poets would have been green with envy. Perhaps an M.B,E. is in order for artistic/literary contribution. Seriously though, I enjoy your skins immensely and found your story pleasantly pleasing.

Aire valley is a lovely part of the world alright, I once had the good fortune to visit there when playing cricket as a schoolboy in the 60's. Marvellous!

P.S. I've saved your story so I can reread it whenever I fancy. As for the publication of a "2002" story - well they still publish the Bible, don't they Cheers, starkers
Reply #42 Top
Bump...there's people out there that might just enjoy a good story...
Reply #43 Top
Unlimited talents BoXXi, excellent story it really sucked me in. This would make a great book if you expanded on it more. Make a series make millions of dollars like the Potter lady there.
Reply #44 Top

Bump...there's people out there that might just enjoy a good story

Astute observation and thanks for the additional bump - don't know how I have missed it before.

BoXXi:
This is a most excellent tale. Visual poetry. In fact, I am going to read it with my young one, for I find it to be a perfect example to use for further fostering her own imagination.

Thank you for sharing.
Reply #45 Top
Really nice story Boxxi. I agree with everyone else that you may have missed your calling.
However, keep it for yourself and your daughter. It stays extra special that way.
Reply #46 Top
Really enjoyed your story! And the art work is A+!
Sharing yourself in the way you did, so beautiful!
Would make a nice entry in a collection of short stories!
Also on audio books, great for short stories, I have always used that form,
along with printed for my children throught the years!

I love the art of "oral story telling"
I wish it wasn't so hard to find. I miss some of the stories my Grandparents and Aunts use to tell. I have been to story telling festivals before, it's been years now!
I miss them. There were some with art work and others were put to music!
All in all, best form of entertainment on the planet! And a vanishing treasure!
You doing a great job, stick with it, if only for us on the web!
We love it!
Reply #47 Top
makes me wish i was with you and visit that enchanted place as well... Are you thinking to write more?
Reply #48 Top
I can't believe it's 4 years since I posted this......... Never did do anything else with Yum.....oh well.
Reply #49 Top
I have thought about this story a lot.  Yum should go far if you ever do do anything with him.  But even if you don't... it is still very precious.
Reply #50 Top
Never did do anything else with Yum.....oh wel


4 years is only a blink of an eye to a dragon....its never too late.