And Yet, Another Poem.

Come meet me in the night

from JoeUser Forums
All is well,
Silence falls upon the eerie ground,
Making such no sound,
That it’s deafening.
Come meet me in the night.

Be together,
Let’s fly away,
Our problems are far below us,
Let’s soar past the moon,
Let’s soar past the stars.
Come meet me in the night.

You were the one in my dreams,
Please make all my dreams realities,
My handsome prince,
Take me away in shining armor
Away from my lonely dungeon
At the top of the tower.
Come meet me in the night.

Many obstacles stand between us,
And only you can get by.
Nothing I say will help.
Nothing I do will solve.
These problems are up to you to get by.
Come meet me in the night.

If you can make it,
I am yours.
Forever yours.
Because if you do,
You have proved I have meant something.
Meant something far more valuable than pearls.
More valuable than diamonds and gold.
You have found love…

Now that you have found that love,
Nothing will ever stand between us again.
Let us soar away….

Tonight.



Definably not my best work…. I was having a crappy day.

Sam
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Soar away on the wings of night,
Away from pain, away from fright,
True love shall prevail,
Together you find your secret vale,
The trials of time test your love at great length,
But you will win, together, with your strength.

Okay, you got me all feeling poetic....although I wish it was better that's all I've got for now.....so, I hope its not horrible....

And yet another good job,
~Zoo
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
That was awesome Shaun, i like that verse! But im not going to add it, it's yours

Sam
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Oh, it wasn't really to add.....just kind of a response in poetry......

~Zoo
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
Awww...that was really romantic Sam! Good work!

~carebear~
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
I love all of your poetry Sam. It makes me happy.


I love you,
Alex
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
All of your poetry makes me so happy too! That is why i am going to steal your sketch book and keep it forever (without you knowing of course!)

Love you
Sam
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
You guys aren't writting happy poetry though... How is it making you happy? You talk about boundaries and stuff like that.

Now that I commented on the comments... I liked it except for "You have proved I have meant something."

I think it could use different wording. It's alright but I think it messes with the flow of the poem.

Capt. over and out!

P.S.~ It's all opinions.
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
Thanks Brandon, i am totally open for options and opinions!

Sam