More nature haikus !

from JoeUser Forums
summer noon-
toiling women in asian ricefield
harvest songs peircing the contryside

a time-worn tree
a gentle breeze
a falling leaf aflutter....



hillside village-
peasants sleeping in the courtyard
a crowing cock startles a hummingbird



Full moon night
placid lake water,heavenly mirror
Lo, a light wind, and thousand pieces!
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
I like that last one.
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Full moon night
placid lake water,heavenly mirror
Lo, a light wind, and thousand pieces!

You mean the above ?

Why dont you also contribute some haikus here?

Thanks, RB
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
>>Why dont you also contribute some haikus here?

I will if I ever do any. But I rather just read them and enjoy, then create a monsterosity.


BTW, Confusing musings, the answer to your question lies two articles below in this blog.
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Haikus are cute compact Japanese poems. In the original, they are of 3 lines-first of 5 syllables, 2nd of 7 and last of 5 again. Modern poets dont strictly follow this 5-7-5 format but all haikus must deal with a central,single, spontaneous theme. Ok, CM?
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
Yeah sure. Got it. Thanks. BTW they are very nice ones.
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
Why dont you contribute some haikus then, CMs ? Love to read your haikus. OK ?